OH, MY
학생이 쓴 원문
I was terrible tired last friday.
but I got a good score in 2 midterm, maybe?
On, tomorrow I will get the big difficult test.
It's a throem of investment.
too difficult to study. sad sad sad terrible
but I find a some interesst in life.
? some wrong interrest? AH? My brain isn'f worked. OH MY
I need a rest in the bad. but terrible night goes on also.
강사 첨삭
Hi Minjeong^^
Oh! What a surprise, despite that you cancelled our class you still sent your composition to at least communicate. I appreciate it. OOps you're becoming pessimistic again. I hope that won't be the case. The way you see things affects your perspective. If you say it's terrible it will really be terrible. I hope that your eyes will be opened to beautiful opportunities in your studies and excellence as well^^ You can do it! Cheer up!
T' Joan
I was terrible tired last friday.
>>I was terribly tired last friday.but I got a good score in 2 midterm, maybe?
>>But I miught have gotten a good score on the 2nd midterm.On, tomorrow I will get the big difficult test.
>>Tomorrow I will have a big and difficult test.It's a throem of investment.
>>It's a theorem of investment.too difficult to study.
>>It's too difficult to study.
sad sad sad terrible
>>I feel sad and terrible.but I find a some interesst in life.
>>But I found something to be interested about in my life. ? some wrong interrest?
>>Did I say, wrong interest?
AH? My brain isn'f worked.
>>AH! My brain isn't working.
OH MY
>> Oh my!I need a rest in the bad.
>>I need a rest in bed.
but terrible night goes on also.
>> But the terrible night goes on also.
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