OH, MY

2011-10-24 · 첨삭 강사 Joan

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I was terrible tired last friday. but I got a good score in 2 midterm, maybe? On, tomorrow I will get the big difficult test. It's a throem of investment. too difficult to study. sad sad sad terrible but I find a some interesst in life. ? some wrong interrest? AH? My brain isn'f worked. OH MY I need a rest in the bad. but terrible night goes on also.

강사 첨삭

Hi Minjeong^^ Oh! What a surprise, despite that you cancelled our class you still sent your composition to at least communicate. I appreciate it. OOps you're becoming pessimistic again. I hope that won't be the case. The way you see things affects your perspective. If you say it's terrible it will really be terrible. I hope that your eyes will be opened to beautiful opportunities in your studies and excellence as well^^ You can do it! Cheer up! T' Joan I was terrible tired last friday. >>I was terribly tired last friday.but I got a good score in 2 midterm, maybe? >>But I miught have gotten a good score on the 2nd midterm.On, tomorrow I will get the big difficult test. >>Tomorrow I will have a big and difficult test.It's a throem of investment. >>It's a theorem of investment.too difficult to study. >>It's too difficult to study. sad sad sad terrible >>I feel sad and terrible.but I find a some interesst in life. >>But I found something to be interested about in my life. ? some wrong interrest? >>Did I say, wrong interest? AH? My brain isn'f worked. >>AH! My brain isn't working. OH MY >> Oh my!I need a rest in the bad. >>I need a rest in bed. but terrible night goes on also. >> But the terrible night goes on also.

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