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2011-03-24 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

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what happen to me... yesterday, the stalker called me several time still. and i sent a warning message " if you sent me a message once again, i understand that mean that i can notify police man. he said " oh, i will declare you to steal my heart." i think he is crazy. but he sent a message only one after i sent a message. and i have a really hate person who is my classmate. he is older than me. and he did do like asshole. actually, i wan't familerize with him. yesterday in classes, he tried to solve my password of my phone over and over. (next)

강사 첨삭

Hello, pretty woman! Be careful not to unintentionally encourage the stalker (a) Never initiate contact with the stalker. They may misperceive this to indicate that you are interested in them. (b) Statements like, "I'm sorry, but I'm just not interested in a relationship at the moment," or "I'm too busy for this right now," may imply that you could be interested in a relationship some time in the future. (c) Statements like, "I already have a boyfriend," may be interpreted as "I'd go out with you but for my boyfriend." (d) Do not let them down easy by delivering your rejection in installments. This will only needlessly prolong the relationship. This may give the stalker hope or give his obsession with you time to grow. (e) Do not return unsolicited letters of gifts. This may prove to the stalker that he is connecting with you. Hope this helps. Take extra care! It’s me, T. Joanna     what happen to me... >>I’ll tell you what’s happening to me. yesterday, the stalker called me several time still. >>Yesterday, the stalker called several times. and i sent a warning message " if you sent me a message once again, i understand that mean that i can notify police man. >>I warned him through sms with this, “If you send me more messages, I will notify the police to keep track on you.” he said " oh, i will declare you to steal my heart." >>He replied, “Oh, I will declare by then that you stole my heart.” i think he is crazy. but he sent a message only one after i sent a message. >>I think he’s crazy. Good thing he sent only one message after I warned him. and i have a really hate person who is my classmate. >>I have this one classmate who I really hate. he is older than me. and he did do like asshole. >>He’s older than me but he does stuffs that are annoying. actually, i wan't familerize with him. >>Actually, he not familiar to me. yesterday in classes, he tried to solve my password of my phone over and over. >>Yesterday, while we are in class, this man was trying to resolve my phone’s password. (next) >>(continuatin on the next page)

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