oh my god

2013-01-08 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

oh my god... all of that i wrote is all gone.... T.T im so confused with that... i would lile writting same things to be more helpful for my kills. i couldnt these cause i was kind of busy that time i used to put down at. anyway im so pleased for you to know how hardly i want to study english. Im being in our anther building where ive been once last year. the reason why im here is that i called my friend who works here to have a lunch and drink beer for keeping in touch with him. i feel to be more natural in using english even if i use simple gramma. i will do everything helping me imrpove my emglish skills graduately. see you later! ;)

강사 첨삭

Hello there! I hope that you are having a good time with your friend there..I admire your drive and resoluteness to study English and I know that you\'ll reach your goal..Don\'t worry because I will also do my best to help you in improving your skills.. Talk to you in class... T. Aurora oh my god... all of that i wrote is all gone.... T.T im so confused with that...>>Oh my god! All that I wrote is all gone.... T.T I\'m so confused with that...i would lile writting same things to be more helpful for my kills.>>I would like to write about the same things because I believe it is more helpful in improving my skills.i couldnt these cause i was kind of busy that time i used to put down at.>> I couldn\'t do these because I was kind a busy that time. ( I am sorry but please explain what you mean by \"I used to put down at\" in class.)anyway im so pleased for you to know how hardly i want to study english.>>Anyway, I\'m so pleased that you know how much I want to study English.OR:>>Anyway, I\'m so pleased that you know how hard I study English.Im being in our anther building where ive been once last year.>>I am in another building where I had been once last year.the reason why im here is that i called my friend who works here to have a lunch and drink beer for keeping in touch with him.>>The reason why I am here is that I called my friend who works here to have lunch and drink beer to keep in touch with him.i feel to be more natural in using english even if i use simple gramma.>> It feels more natural using English when I use simple grammar. OR:>> I feel less awkward in using English when I use simple grammar.i will do everything helping me imrpove my emglish skills graduately.>>I will do everything that can help me improve my English skills gradually.See you later! ;) >> Correct!

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