Oh my gosh~~!!
학생이 쓴 원문
Oh my gosh~~!! My cel phone hasn't been delivered yet.
I'm totally confused. I don't know what to say to you.
I'm really really sorry.
There's nothing to say except for 'See ya'.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!
Yeah, I guessed that you still haven't received your new mobile phone. Don't worry about me, I understand. Anyways, just in case tomorrow you will still not be able to receive your new phone, call the management in order for them to hold the class for you. Anyways take care. Have a great day!!
Regards,
[이름]
Oh my gosh~~!! My cel phone hasn't been delivered yet.
>> Oh my gosh~~!! My cell/mobile phone hasn't been delivered yet.
I'm totally confused.
>>correct
I don't know what to say to you.
>>I don't know what and how to tell you
I'm really really sorry.
>>correct
There's nothing to say except 'See ya'.
>>correct
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