Oh, My Morning!

There are variety of cars in the world. A car became a necessity in the modern life. Our life would be unconvenient whthout a car. The same may be my life. I live whth my husband, but we have only car that is belongs to him. Using one car whit together is really uncomfortabls. So I really eager to have my own car : Morning made by Kia corporation. The reason why I want to buy a Morning, because it's cheaper than other cars. It has beautiful design and very high gas mileage also. I know that I don't have enough money to buy Morning, even though it is cheap. For all that I will never give it up and I'd love to buy my car someday.

[이름], I seem to understand what you are going through. In a place where you dwell, a car is really necessary. I live in a small city where the public transportation is good enough. I don’t really need a car. I hope you’ll be able to buy your dream car! ^^ XOXO, Jenny   Here are my corrections.  There are variety of cars in the world. >> There are varieties of cars in the world. A car became a necessity in the modern life. >> Cars became a necessity in modern life. Our life would be unconvenient whthout a car. >>Our life would be inconvenient without a car. The same may be my life. >>It is the same for my case. I live whth my husband, but we have only car that is belongs to him. >> I live with my husband, but we only have one car to share that he owns/that belongs to him. Using one car whit together is really uncomfortabls. >>Sharing one car is really uncomfortable. So I really eager to have my own car : >>So I’m really eager to have my own car. Morning made by Kia corporation. >> I want the Morning car made by KIA Corporation. The reason why I want to buy a Morning, because it's cheaper than other cars. >>The reason why I want to buy a Morning is because it’s cheaper than other cars. It has beautiful design and very high gas mileage also. >>Correct sentence. You may not use “very” I know that I don't have enough money to buy Morning, even though it is cheap. >>Correct sentence.  For all that I will never give it up and I'd love to buy my car someday >> But then, I will never give up and I’d love to have my own car someday.