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2012-02-21 · 첨삭 강사 Razel

학생이 쓴 원문

First I worte a lot of comment, but during writting, connect other website so my Wrote was deleted ㅠㅠ So i just answer the theacher's question. Which do yo prefer, coffee or tea? Why?^^ I didn't like that's type of drinks. but i was prefer coffee than tea, but i like sweet drinks.^^ I'm so sorry for lost my writting.-.-

강사 첨삭

Happy Tuesday:)I understand what happenend still, thank you for making another composition:)Have a great day!   First I worte a lot of comment, but during writting, connect other website so my Wrote was deleted ㅠㅠ>>First I wrote a lot of comment but while I was sriting, I accidentally opened another website that\'s why my composition was deleted.So i just answer the theacher\'s question.>>So I\'ll just answer my teacher\'s question.Which do yo prefer, coffee or tea? Why?^^>>CORRECTI didn\'t like that\'s type of drinks. >>I don\'t like those drinls.but i was prefer coffee than tea, but i like sweet drinks.^^>>But I prefer coffee than tea. But, I like sweet drinks.I\'m so sorry for lost my writting.-.- >>I\'m sorry for losing my original composition.

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