Oh, yeah

2019-05-13 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

When I went to India, I went to restaurant of French tosts and ordered the french potato, hanburgar and juice. It is my best food in my life. and these days, I often go to korean restaurant and then eat kimchizige(김치찌개). When I order it, I can eat a side menu. it is service that best menu. And then, I like soup kinds of 순대국밥. It is very good food so I lile it. If you come to our country, I want to buy this food. Anyway Have a good weekend

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

I like your detailed description and the giving of examples.

Let\'s learn more vocabulary words so that you can share your exact thoughts.

Take note of the suggestions below.

I\'ll talk to you in class.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon
When I went to India, I went to restaurant of French tosts and ordered the french potato, hanburgar and juice.
>> When I was in India, I went to a restaurant named \"French Toast\" and I ordered French fries, a hamburger and juice.

It is my best food in my life.
>> It is the best food that I\'ve ever had.
and these days, I often go to korean restaurant and then eat kimchizige(김치찌개). When I order it, I can eat a side menu. it is service that best menu.
>> These days, I often go to Korean restaurants and have Kimchi soup.

When I order it, I can eat a side menu.

>> When I order it, they give me side dishes.

it is service that best menu.

>> The restaurant has the best service and menu.
And then, I like soup kinds of 순대국밥.

>> I like different kinds of soup.

It is very good food so I lile it.

>> It is very good food and that\'s why I like it.

If you come to our country, I want to buy this food.

>> If you come to our country, I want to buy this food for you.

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