Oh Yes..

2011-02-12 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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Hi~~ I went to hospital with mom. beacouse mom is sick everybody. She is old.. so I'm sad sometimes.. It passed this week with you. I had a time very interesting(^^*), And I expect to next week. ^^* See you next week~~~

강사 첨삭

Hello, Thank you for dropping by. I hope your Mom will be okay soon. Take care and I hope to enjoy our time nextweek again. I’m happy that you like our class. I will try my best to make it fun.  J See you on Monday, Bianca, Hi~~I went to hospital with mom. >> I went to the hospital with my Mom. beacouse mom is sick everybody. >> because my Mom gets sick everyday. She is old.. >> Correctso I'm sad sometimes..>> So, I’m sad sometimes. >> So, sometimes I’m sad. It passed this week with you. >> correctI had a time very interesting(^^*), >> I had a very interesting time. And I expect to next week. >> I’m expecting the same thing nextweek. ^^*See you next week~~~ >> Correct

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