Oh Yes..
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi~~
I went to hospital with mom.
beacouse mom is sick everybody.
She is old..
so I'm sad sometimes..
It passed this week with you.
I had a time very interesting(^^*),
And I expect to next week.
^^*
See you next week~~~
강사 첨삭
Hello,
Thank you for dropping by. I hope your Mom will be okay soon. Take care
and I hope to enjoy our time nextweek again. I’m happy that you like our class.
I will try my best to make it fun. J
See you on Monday,
Bianca,
Hi~~I went to hospital with mom.
>> I went to the hospital with my Mom. beacouse mom is sick everybody.
>> because my Mom gets sick everyday. She is old..
>> Correctso I'm sad sometimes..>> So, I’m sad sometimes.
>> So, sometimes I’m sad. It passed this week with you.
>> correctI had a time very interesting(^^*),
>> I had a very interesting time. And I expect to next week.
>> I’m expecting the same thing nextweek. ^^*See you next week~~~
>> Correct
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