ohhhhhhhhhh~! very cold
학생이 쓴 원문
Wow, today is very cold. It was freezing~
I wanted to play with my friend after school.
However, the weather was so cold so we just talked and played outside just a little bit.
Today, my condition was so great!!
Unfortunately, today the weather was extremely cold so we played soccer for a short time. Also, we had civil defense training so we couldn't move, I mean we couldn't cross streets or play outside.
Oh no, I really wanted to play aligator and soccer!!
My plans turned into bubbles.
Wasn't it cold today Teacher RJ?
강사 첨삭
Hi Joey!
Yeah, it was pretty cold today. Too bad to hear you weren't able to play today. Talk to you later, maybe we could talk more about this. Take care!
-RJ-
Wow, today is very cold. It was freezing~
>>correctI wanted to play with my friend after school.
>>correctHowever, the weather was so cold so we just talked and played outside just a little bit.
>>However, the weather was so cold so we just talked and played outside for awhile.Today, my condition was so great!!
>>correctUnfortunately, today's weather was extremely cold so we played soccer for just a short time.
>>Unfortunately, today the weather was extremely cold so we played soccer for a short time.
Also, we had civil defense training so we couldn't move, I mean we couldn't cross streets or play outside.
>>Also, we had civil defense training so we couldn't move around, I mean we couldn't cross the streets or play outside.Oh no, I really wanted to play aligator and soccer!!
>>Oh no, I really wanted to play alligator and soccer!!My plans turned into bubbles.>>correctWasn't it cold today Teacher RJ?
>>correct
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