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2011-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Bianca

학생이 쓴 원문

Oh! Nothing happened ㅋㅋㅋ Today, I did really nothing. It was just a ordinary time. Thesedays, it's too boring. I didn't even went out with my friends. Tomorrow I'm going to take a english test, Junior Toefl. It's much easier than the real Toefl because I took the IBT so much! because it's our academy's leve up test. MY best score was 98!! It's quite good. But the junior toefl is very easy. Howevr, last time, I've get a silver. I needed 5 more points to get a gold. OH no! This time, I'm going to have a great score.

강사 첨삭

Hello Joey, Oh that's too bad. I usually just surf the internet when I'm bored. Why are you going to take the Junior TOEFL? Let's talk about it later. -RJ- Nothing happened ㅋㅋㅋ >>correctToday, I did really nothing. It was just a ordinary time. >>Today, I did absolutely nothing. It was just an ordinary time.Thesedays, it's too boring. I didn't even went out with my friends. >>These days, it's so boring. I didn't even go out with my friends.Tomorrow I'm going to take a english test, Junior Toefl.  >>Tomorrow I'm going to take an English test, Junior Toefl.  It's much easier than the real Toefl because I took the IBT so much! because it's our academy's leve up test.  >>It's much easier than the real Toefl because I took the IBT so many times because it's our academy's level up test.  MY best score was 98!! It's quite good. >>correctBut the junior toefl is very easy. Howevr, last time, I've get a silver.  >>But the junior toefl is very easy. However, last time I got a silver.  I needed 5 more points to get a gold. OH no! This time, I'm going to have a great score. >>correct

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