Ointment
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I like to get oil massage. I have received coconut oil massage several times when I traveled to Thailand for the first time. After the experience, I try to get coconut massage when traveling to Asian countries.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
Thank you for sharing with me what you usually use for massages. It\'s the same in my country! A lot of people use coconut oil for massages, especially for fractures or sprains, since it has anti-inflammatory properties.
- T. Caitlyn
I like to get oil massage.
>> I like to get oil massages.
I have received coconut oil massage several times when I traveled to Thailand for the first time.
>> I received coconut oil massages several times when I traveled to Thailand for the first time.
After the experience, I try to get coconut massage when traveling to Asian countries.
>> After the experience, I try to get coconut oil massages when traveling to Asian countries.
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