Ojak bridge

2015-08-20 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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Today is July 7th of the lunar calendar. It means that Gyunwoo and Jiknyeo meet today in the Ojak bridge once a year. Ojak is made of two letters in Korean. O means a crow and Jak means make and build, so Ojak means made of crow. Ojak bridge means crow made bridge. "Gyunwoo and Jiknyeo" It is a kind of legend that hand down in Korea, Japan and China telling about the summer constellation. The story tells " Gyunwoo who farms with cow and Jiknyeo who weaves thread into cloth can't meet each other. They are standing on the opposite side of the Milky Way, and can meet only once a year in the middle of the bridge made by the crows and magpies on July 7th of the lunar calendar. They grieve at the separation and shed a tear rasulting in rains." Coincidently,It rained today here in Korea. Please look for someone who loves you and you love him, and be a pair of happy lovers. I hope this can be applicable to your case. Be happy!!

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Dear [Name]. [이름],   A terrific Thursday to you! ^.^   I really enjoyed reading the love story of Gyun-Woo and Jik-Nyu. However, I don\'t want to be like them. I want to be with the man I love. Don\'t worry! ^^ I will make sure that I will be with the man I love and loves me. I will have a happy life with him. Hahaha! ^^, Frankly speaking, I envy you. I know that you already found the woman of your life. That is really good for you.   Anyway, that\'s all for now! ^^ Happy reading! ^^, See you tomorrow! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Today is July 7th of the lunar calendar. >> Today is July 7th of the Lunar Calendar. (LUNAR CALENDAR us considered as a Proper Noun, so the first letters of the words should be capitalized.) It means that Gyunwoo and Jiknyeo meet today in the Ojak bridge once a year. >> It means that Gyunwoo and Jiknyeo meet today at the Ojak Bridge once a year. (The first letters of OJAK and BRIDGE should be capitalized. Since OJAK BRIDGE is a specific location, AT should be used.) >> OR: It means that Gyun-Woo and Jik-Nyu meet each other at the Ojak Bridge today, and they do this every year. >> OR: It means that Gyun-Woo and Jik-Nyu meet each other at the Ojak Bridge on this day, and they do this annually. Ojak is made of two letters in Korean. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Ojak is derived from two Korean letters. O means a crow and Jak means make and build, so Ojak means made of crow. >> O means a crow and Jak means make and build, so Ojak means made of crow. >> OR: \'O\' means a crow and \'Jak\' means make and build, so \'Ojak\' means made of crow. Ojak bridge means crow made bridge. >> I THINK WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY IS: Ojak Bridge means a bridge made by a crow. \"Gyunwoo and Jiknyeo\" It is a kind of legend that hand down in Korea, Japan and China telling about the summer constellation. >> IT IS BETTER TO WRITE: \"Gyun-Woo and Jik-Nyu\" is a kind of legend that is handed down from generation to generation in Korea, Japan and China telling about the summer constellation. The story tells \" Gyunwoo who farms with cow and Jiknyeo who weaves thread into cloth can\'t meet each other. >> The story tells, \"Gyunwoo, who farms with a cow, and Jiknyeo, who weaves thread into cloth, can\'t meet each other. They are standing on the opposite side of the Milky Way, and can meet only once a year in the middle of the bridge made by the crows and magpies on July 7th of the lunar calendar. >> They are standing on the opposite side of the Milky Way, and can meet only once a year in the middle of the bridge made by the crows and magpies on July 7th of the Lunar Calendar. (Capitalize LUNAR CALENDAR.) They grieve at the separation and shed a tear rasulting in rains.\" >> IT IS BETTER TO SAY: They grieve at their separation and shed tears resulting in rain.\" Coincidently,It rained today here in Korea. >> Coincidentially, it rained today in Korea. (Check your spacing and capitalization.) Please look for someone who loves you and you love him, and be a pair of happy lovers. >> I THINK WHAT YOU REALLY WANT TO SAY IS: Please look for someone who loves you and you love, and be a pair of happy lovers. I hope this can be applicable to your case. >> CORRECT! Be happy!! >> CORRECT!

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