Okay, let me speak from what I wrote.
학생이 쓴 원문
According to the various judgement, I can't really pinpoint the reason behind it. However, the referees can not be exempted from their grave responsibilities. In this mean, we have to forcefully ask them to prevent the misjudgement affecting every corner of the world. And they should quit fooling around. Otherwise, Korean netizens will haunt them forever. It will be just that everybody was in their face all day, and suffocating them. As to so many sensational articles these days, the judgement delegation should learn how to behave themselves.
This compostion was applied by the key expressions respectively that I leaned today. So it would probably be weird in cohesion. Anyways, I'm sure it will improve my language skills.
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]! I think this would be an interesting that we could talk about tonight. There are really unavoidable circumstances. Well, you are right because that is the duty of media. News are sensationalized and sometimes fabricated.
-Teacher Chloe
According to the various judgement, I can\'t really pinpoint the reason behind it.
>>According to the various judgements, I can't really pinpoint the reason behind it.
However, the referees can not be exempted from their grave responsibilities.
>>Correct
In this mean, we have to forcefully ask them to prevent the misjudgement affecting every corner of the world.
>>It means, we have to forcefully ask them to prevent misjudgements affecting every game.
And they should quit fooling around.
>>Correct
Otherwise, Korean netizens will haunt them forever.
>>Correct
It will be just that everybody was in their face all day, and suffocating them.
>>It will turn out to be like everybody will have to face them all day, suffocating them.
As to so many sensational articles these days, the judgement delegation should learn how to behave themselves. >>CorrectThis compostion was applied by the key expressions respectively that I leaned today.
>>Correct
So it would probably be weird in cohesion.
>>Correct
Anyways, I\'m sure it will improve my language skills.
>>Correct
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