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In my town there are not so many old ones. I live in Incheon. There are a lot of buildings under construction in Incheon. but I can tell you that Dolmen is one of the typical grave style of Bronze Age. It's very big that the Dolmen is supposed to build by lots of poeple fora long time. It was designated UNESCO's memory of the world in 2000.

Hi Sunny!  Great job for this composition. I like your answers; they were simple yet accurate. I felt that you have put your best effort into this and I am happy! Carry on and see you in class!! Ali   In my town there are not so many old ones. >>> In my town there are not so many old buildings. ( On the first mention of the noun, try not to use a pronoun first.)I live in Incheon. >>> Correct There are a lot of buildings under construction in Incheon. >>> Correctbut I can tell you that Dolmen is one of the typical grave style of Bronze Age. >>> But I can tell you that Dolmen is one of the typical grave style architecture of the Bronze Age.It's very big that the Dolmen is supposed to build by lots of poeple for a long time. >>> It's very big that the Dolmen is supposed to built by lots of people for a long period of time.It was designated UNESCO's memory of the world in 2000. >>> It was designated as UNESCO's heritage of the world in 2000.