Olleh
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There are many kind of public worker's tests.
Those will be taken once a month from this month until July.
Almost people take seventh level or ninth level of officials.
Seventh level is much more difficult to be.
I don't know why eighth level does not exist.
They are also divided by regions in the gorvernment or our locals.
According to my friend's saying, whoever prepares to be an official takes almost those test.
Because those have the similar range of the subjects each other in the same field.
They are depended on how many subjects and how deep they are.
All the sentences mean that the guy is going to the library continually until July.
But I want to say again. I'm not out of his league.
During the last calling I remember, I made a mistake on saying the opposition to that:D
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There are many kind of public worker's tests.
>> There are many kinds of public worker's tests.
Those will be taken once a month from this month until July.
>>correct
>> These will be taken once a month from this month until July.
Almost people take seventh level or ninth level of officials.
>> Almost all people take seventh level or ninth level of officials.
Seventh level is much more difficult to be.
>>correctI don't know why eighth level does not exist.
>>correctThey are also divided by regions in the gorvernment or our locals.
>>correctAccording to my friend's saying, whoever prepares to be an official takes almost those test.
>> According to my friend, almost all who prepares to be an official takes those test.
Because those have the similar range of the subjects each other in the same field.
>>(This is a little bit unclear. Did you mean…)
>> Because those have a similar range of subjects from each other in the same field.
>>(I still don’t get what you like to say though. Haha!)
They are depended on how many subjects and how deep they are.
>>They are dependent on how many subjects and how deep they are.All the sentences mean that the guy is going to the library continually until July.
>>correct (So are you going to the library until July either? Haha!)But I want to say again. I'm not out of his league.
>>correct During the last calling I remember, I made a mistake on saying the opposition to that :D
>> correct, but I would suggest don’t use the gerund “calling”
>> During the last call I remember, I made a mistake on saying the opposition to that. :D
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