Olympic
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In my country, it was so good to win four gold medals In archery.
But last Saturday football lost in the quarter-finals against Mexico.
Some games are going well and others don\'t seem to be playing properly.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
This is definitely something to be proud of.
I want to congratulate you.
Hopefully, they would continue their winning streak.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
In my country, it was so good to win four gold medals In archery.
>> It was so good because our country won four gold medals in archery.
But last Saturday football lost in the quarter-finals against Mexico.
But last Saturday football lost in the quarter-finals against Mexico.
>> However, last Saturday. our football team lost in the quarter finals against Mexico.
Some games are going well and others don\'t seem to be playing properly.
Some games are going well and others don\'t seem to be playing properly.
>> Some games are going well and other athletes don\'t seem to be playing properly.
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