Olympics spirit

Originally Olympics spirit follow an ideal and peace among nations. And there endeavor and sweat better than simple victory or result. Nevertheless most nations or athlete want to win the game and gold medal including my country. Although win is important in game, it have been enforced excessively. And the Olympics become the event hall from sponsors. They are trying to entertain their logo, image, products in game through players who have been volunteered from major companies. So, I feel that is a matter for regret. However I.O.C member and nations which participate in Olympics could change this wrong procedure by persuading opposite prompters and nations. And let people start to change mind about real Olympics spirit. Though in every game, there’s a winner and a loser, both are eligible to get enough celebration and encouragement.

Hi there, Sir [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! You did a great job in writing this one. News about the Olympic Games has been all over the world for the past few days. It\'s relaxing and entertaining to watch the different games. I am a witness of how Koreans support their athletes. I can say that you really have a strong sense of nationalism. Because of that, I can say that win or lose, you can call yourselves as the winner. Take care and have a nice day! T. JanE ^^ Originally Olympics spirit follow an ideal and peace among nations. >> Originally, the spirit of Olympic is ideal and peaceful among nations. And there endeavor and sweat better than simple victory or result. >> Sweat is much better than victory. Nevertheless most nations or athlete want to win the game and gold medal including my country. >> Nevertheless, most nations including my country, or athletes want to win the game and get the gold medal. Although win is important in game, it have been enforced excessively. >> Winning is important in a game, but it should not be enforced excessively. And the Olympics become the event hall from sponsors. >> The Olympic has become the event hall for sponsors. They are trying to entertain their logo, image, products in game through players who have been volunteered from major companies. >> They are trying to endorse their logo, image, and products in games through players who have volunteered for major companies. So, I feel that is a matter for regret. >> Correct However I.O.C members and nations which participate in Olympics could change this wrong procedure by persuading opposite prompters and nations. >> Correct And let people start changing their mind about real Olympics spirit. >> Correct Though in every game, there’s a winner and a loser, both are eligible to get enough celebration and encouragement. >> Correct