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2017-11-20 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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How can you prepare for a possible earthquake? Answer in not more than FIVE (5) sentences. I think it's safe to go outside when the earthquake happens. If I sit under the table, my head can become dangerous as break the table. Also,it would be dangerous because the gas may explode. Then,my house will burn and we will die. So,I think it's safe to go [이름].

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. be educated and alert for a possible earthquake. Stay safe always.^^

~t. Kelly^^

How can you prepare for a possible earthquake? Answer in not more than FIVE (5) sentences.
I think it\'s safe to go outside when the earthquake happens.

>> I think, it\'s safe to go outside when an earthquake happens.
If I sit under the table, my head can become dangerous as break the table.

>> It is not safe to sit under the table because if buildings collapse, we are crushed.

Also,it would be dangerous because the gas may explode.

>> Also, it could be dangerous because of gas explosion.
Then,my house will burn and we will die.

>> My house will be burned and we will die.
So,I think it\'s safe to go [이름].

>> So, I think it is safer to go to the [이름].

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