OMG ~!

2012-07-03 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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I'm so Sorry, Cam! Today, suddenly I had an appointment. It's important a forum to our team. My team was adopt to preparatory Social Enterprise by country. So our team has to attend the forum. Against my expectation, the forum takes too long times. So I can't help rejecting a call. Anyway, I'm so sorry again~! And see you tomorrow!

강사 첨삭

Hello my dear [이름], I\'m sad that we didn\'t have class this afternoon but now I totally understand you my dear. Tomorrow maybe we can continue with our textbook.. Take care always and have a good night.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ I\'m so Sorry, Cam!Today, suddenly I had an appointment. >>correctIt\'s important a forum to our team. >>Its very important to meet my team today. My team was adopt to preparatory Social Enterprise by country. >>My team adopted a Preparatory Social Enterprise in our country. So our team has to attend the forum. >>correctAgainst my expectation, the forum takes too long times. >>I didn\'t expect to take the forum for a long period of time. >>I didn\'t expect that the forum will take long. So I can\'t help rejecting a call. Anyway, I\'m so sorry again~! And see you tomorrow! >>correct

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