Omicron Virus
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Theme : [ESSAY] What\'s your thought on the new COVID variant called Omicron? [In 3~5 Sentences]
I think it is so scary.
I thought the Delta virus is so scary but today, I knew that there\'s new virus called Omicron.
I searched the news and I knew a Japanese diplomat came in to Korea, Inchon airport.
I think the Omicron virus is so scary! : (
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Theme : [ESSAY] What\'s your thought on the new COVID variant called Omicron? [In 3~5 Sentences]
I think it is so scary.
>> or: Personally, I think it\'s alarming.
I thought the Delta virus is so scary but today, I knew that there\'s new virus called Omicron.
>> I thought the Delta variant was already so scary but today, I knew that there\'s a new COVID-19 variant called Omicron.
I searched the news and I knew a Japanese diplomat came in to Korea, Inchon airport.
>> I searched the news and read that a Japanese diplomat had a layover at Incheon airport in Korea before flying to Japan.
I think the Omicron virus is so scary! : (
>> I certainly think the Omicron variant is so scary! : (
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