On a desert island

2010-11-29 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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(Today's conversation subject) What should I do, if I were on a desert island alone. It would be a sad situation and shouldn't happen all my time. But I can image living on the island. First of all, I will gather some foods such as oyster, sea cucumber, sea squirt, etc. I don't know whether it is delicious or not without Korean spices.(Do I have to order Korean spices via DHL) Anyway, it will be very exciting experience for a week not any more. so I have to devise something like a boat or signal fire to invite a female who have to be isolated like me.

강사 첨삭

Hi SK!! I find your composition today so entertaining!! kkk So you will invite a female to be isolated with you on the island? That was pretty clever. I like that idea hahaha! Anyway, good job on writing another composition. You can keep writing everyday. If  you want me to suggest any topics for you, just let me know.. See you in class! Shy   (Today's conversation subject) >> CorrectWhat should I do, if I were on a desert island alone. >> What should I do if I were on a desert island alone?It would be a sad situation and shouldn't happen all my time. >> It would be a sad situation and it shouldn't happen ever.But I can image living on the island. >> CorrectFirst of all, I will gather some foods such as oyster, sea cucumber, sea squirt, etc. >> Correct I don't know whether it is delicious or not without Korean spices.(Do I have to order Korean spices via DHL) >> I don't know whether it is delicious or not without Korean spices.(Do I have to order Korean spices via DHL?) ~ This one made me laugh.Anyway, it will be very exciting experience for a week not any more. >> Anyway, it will be very exciting experience for a week but not for a long  time so I have to devise something like a boat or signal fire to invite a female who have to be isolated like me. >> So I have to devise something like a boat or a signal fire to invite a female who have to be isolated like me.  

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