On a Sick day
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
Thank you for your composition today! I\'m sorry about your bad condition. I hope that you will feel better. Take care and have a nice day!
T. Alice
Oh, Hello Alice. I think probably today was the sickest day for me this year maybe.
>> Hello, Alice. I think, today is the sickest day for me.
I\'ve been in good condition until 2 pm but suddenly I started to feel sick and painful, especially to my stomach.
>> I was in good condition until 2 pm, but suddenly, I started to feel pain in my stomach.
Until that time, I thought it would be better as time goes.
>> I thought it would be better as time goes by.
However, unlike my expection, the bad symtoms started to be worse on and on.
>> However, unlike my expectation, the bad symptoms started to get worse.
Finally, I requested the bus driver to stop and got off the bus alone.
>> Correct
As soon as I got off the bus, I blindly ran to the edge of the road and began vomitting.
>> Correct
And then, I managed to catch a taxi and I could go back to my domitary.
>> Then I managed to catch a taxi to my dormitory.
It was so terrifying to come to think of it.
>> It was so terrifying.
Fortunately, I feel good not after having enough time to sleep.
>> Fortunately, I felt good after having enough sleep.
From this personal experience, I could learn \"Sometimes, too much having food makes a person sick however the food health may be \" On a second thought, the main culprit of my illness is contributed to overeating at the Chirstmas Party.
>> From this personal experience, I learned that eating too much can make a person sick regardless of how nutritious the foods are. The main culprit of my illness is overeating at the Christmas Party.
In the future, I\'ll try not to overeat.
>> Correct
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