On a special day.
학생이 쓴 원문
On special day , i try to eat special food with my family.
For me, family is most important.
So if i have rest time or special time i like to spent my time with my family.
And my husband loves cook special food.
And i help him :)
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On special day , i try to eat special food with my family.>> On a special day, I try to eat special food with my family.
For me, family is most important.
For me, family is most important.
>> For me, family is the most important.
So if i have rest time or special time i like to spent my time with my family.
So if i have rest time or special time i like to spent my time with my family.
>> So, if I have time to rest, or any special time, I like to spend it with my family.
And my husband loves cook special food.
And my husband loves cook special food.
>> My husband loves to cook special food.
And i help him :)
And i help him :)
>> So I help him. :)
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