On investigation

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Wow! Well said!

You were able to elaborate your ideas.

I am so happy that you are knowledgeable enough about communication.

Thank you for expressing yourself in writing.

Please go over the corrections I provided for you.

Teacher Nina

We think that our thought is only exchanged by language.

>> Did you mean: We think that our thoughts is only expressed through language.
but there are two factors in exchanging thought.

>> Did you mean: But there are two factors in expressing ideas.
Communication consists of two things, verbal thing and non-verbal thing.

>> Communication consists of two things: verbal and non verbal.
Of course verbal thing is speaking, listening, talking, writing.

>> Correct!
You might think verbal thing is more powerful to transfer your thought, but it\'s not

>> You might think that verbal is more powerful to transfer your thought but it\'s not.
On the investigation, people have some kind of good feeling with Lower voice, Logic and gesture.

>> Did you mean: During an investigation, people have a good feeling with moderate tone, logic and gesture.
Surprisingly, the percentage of logic(15%) have minimal effect on the communication .

>> Surprisingly, the percentage of logic is fifteen percent and it has a minimal effect on communication.
but, the non verval things are more powerful in the conversation and communication.

>> Non verbal is more powerful in conversation and communication.
Lower voice make people trust and gesture make people focus on it.

>> Did you mean: With a moderate tone, people can trust and gestures make people more focused on it.
So I think the gesture have a power on the communication.

>> So I think gesture has the power in terms of communication.