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2011-09-27 · 첨삭 강사 Karla

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I'm hearing the conversaion with you last Friday morning. It's so helpful to hear again what and how I have talked in English. At that time, in the morning I was excited to see LG people who were supposed to be interested in Media Arts, but when I met them I realized that it was my wrong expectation. They were not so interested in the Arts as I had expected. Only a few responses came back to me and I thought I need to prepare easier and more interesting stuff. Be happy, Aurora, since you're not the only one who isn't so familiar with the New Media Arts. :)

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!             It has been such a nice habit of yours to write something as your composition every now and then. Keep up the good work! = ) T.Aurora   Im hearing the conversaion with you last Friday morning. >>I have been hearing the conversation with you since last Friday morning. >>I have been having conversation with you since last week of Friday morning. Its so helpful to hear again what and how I have talked in English. >>Correct!At that time in the morning I was excited to see LG people who were supposed to be interested in Media Arts  but when I met them I realized that it was my wrong expectation. >> I was excited to see people from LG Company that time in the morning. They are supposed to be interested in Media and Arts but when I realized that it was a wrong expectation of mine when I met them.They were not so interested in the Arts as I had expected. >>They were not as interested in Arts as I had expected. Only a few responses came back to me and I thought I need to prepare easier and more interesting stuff. >>Only few responses came back to me and I thought that I need to prepare easier and more interesting stuff.Be happy Aurora since youre not the only one who isnt so familiar with the New Media Arts. :) >>You should be happy Aurora since you are not the only one who is not familiar with new Media and Arts. :)

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