on my way to home

Hi Kelly! Having a smart phone, I can this message on my way to home. It's 7:00pm when most worker come bact to home after work by cars, buses or trains. Right, it's really rush hour!! So whenever I am waiting for a bus to home, I usually enjoy seeing waht the people who waiting like me do. Someone is smiling by listen to music, another is reading the book or checking bus schedule again and again by wishing to get on the bus as soon as possible. During that time, I usually imagine where my girl will be and when I am able to meet her. To imagine a happy something like that, I think, it's good for our mental health. And if this hobby is repeated again and again, always we can be happy and interesting!! This is secret in my happy life. Oh! The bus is comming over there! Have great dinner!

Hi there! You are very clever. Your attitude in life will bring you to success. Keep up with that enthusiasm! I\'m glad to have a student like you. Enjoy your rest! T. Kelly ^^ Here are my corrections for you: Hi Kelly! >> CorrectHaving a smart phone, I can this message on my way to home. >> Having a smartphone is very convenient because I can send a message even on my way home. It\'s 7:00pm when most worker come bact to home after work by cars, buses or trains. >>At 7:00 pm, most workers go home after their work by cars, buses or trains. Right, it\'s really rush hour!! >> It\'s rush hour! So whenever I am waiting for a bus to home, I usually enjoy seeing waht the people who waiting like me do. >> While waiting for the bus, I enjoy watching other people doing different things. Someone is smiling by listen to music, another is reading the book or checking bus schedule again and againby wishing to get on the bus as soon as possible. >> Someone is smiling while listening to music, another one is reading a book or checking the bus schedule from time to time. During that time, I usually imagine where my girl will be and when I am able to meet her. >> During that time, I imagine my future girlfriend and when will I meet her. To imagine a happy something like that, I think, it\'s good for our mental health. >>To imagine a happy thought is good for our mental health. And if this hobby is repeated again and again, always we can be happy and interesting!! >> And if we keep on doing this hobby, we can always be happy.This is secret in my happy life. >> This is the secret of my happy life. Oh! The bus is comming over there! >> Oh! The bus has arrived! Have great dinner! >> Correct