on next day, I'm on my duty.

1.We met during the Xmas holidays 2.I learned French while I was working in a wine bar in Paris. 3.It happened while I was out. 4.It happened during my lunchbreak. 5.It happened during the flooding. 6.It happened during the floods. 7.I fell alseep during the film. 8.I fell alseep while I was watching the film. 9.We had a lot of trouble during the journey. 10.while working there, I met some really nice people. I did my duty last saturday. but I also do my duty on this weekend too. because my coworker asked me to help. He said there is no one can do duty. go out to rest so I accepted it. but I heard the news about this saturday when I have to do my duty. the point is this saturday will very busy. as I heard that news. I felt sad. because It seems like to lie to me. Even he has not will to deceive me, I still sad

Hi there!

It must have been a tiring weekend but just relax and take time to smell the roses!^^

I read what you wrote and you did a great job to tell me about what happened.

Please work on your sentence structures like combining two or more short sentences.

Never forget to capitalize the first letter in your sentences. 

Most importantly, please try to explain yourself more and include additional information.

Through detailed explanation, your English ability, I promise, will skyrocket!

xoxo>.<

1.We met during the Xmas holidays

>>CORRECT!

>> We met during the Christmas holidays.
2.I learned French while I was working in a wine bar in Paris.

>>CORRECT!
3.It happened while I was out.

>>CORRECT!
4.It happened during my lunchbreak.

>>CORRECT!
5.It happened during the flooding.
>>CORRECT!

6.It happened during the floods.
>>CORRECT!

7.I fell alseep during the film.

>>CORRECT!
8.I fell alseep while I was watching the film.

>>CORRECT!
9.We had a lot of trouble during the journey.

>>CORRECT!
10.while working there, I met some really nice people.
>>CORRECT!

>> While working there, I met some really nice people.

 I did my duty last saturday. but I also do my duty on this weekend too.
because my coworker asked me to help.

>>CORRECT!

>> I had my duty last Saturday.

>> Please capitalize the word \"Saturday\". Remember that proper nouns like names of places, people, events, etc. are always capitalized.

but I also do my duty on this weekend too.

>> Since your first three sentences were short and can be combined into one, let us just say:

>> I did my duty last Saturday but I also had to do it this weekend because my coworker asked me to help.
He said there is no one can do duty.

>> He said, there\'s no one who could do the job.

>> According to him, there was no one to take over.
go out to rest

>> I went out to relax.

>> I went out to take a rest.
so I accepted it. but I heard the news about this saturday when I have to do my duty.

>>I accepted it but I heard the news about this Saturday when I had to report.
the point is this saturday will very busy.

>> The point was this Saturday was very busy.
as I heard that news. I felt sad. because It seems like to lie to me.

>> As I heard the news, I felt sad because it seemed like a lie to me.
Even he has not will to deceive me, I still sad

>>Even if it was not his intention to deceive me, I still feel sad.

>>Even if it was not intentional, I am still sad about it.