On Parent's day

2012-05-14 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

Parent's day is on May 8th in Korea. So,I planned something special for my parents. I wrote cards to my mom and dad. I also gave them red carnations. But I think that wasn't enough to express my love. So I bought some chickens. They were my parent's favorite. I really want to make my parents happy. Sometimes my mom is very strict, but I still love her. My dad is always noce to me. He sometimes even gives me some allowances. So,I made them happy on Parent's day!

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! Thank you so much for your composition today. You are such a sweet and thoughtful daughter! I am sure that your parents were very happy that day. You made them feel so special! Our parents can be so strict sometimes. Remember that they only want the best for us, so don\'t feel so down when your parents get angry because that means you did something wrong that made them feel that way. Try to be obedient most of the time. Take care and have a great day! T. JanE ^^ Parent\'s day is on May 8th in Korea. >> Correct  So,I planned something special for my parents. >> That\'s why I planned for something special for my parents.  I wrote cards to my mom and dad.>> I wrote cards for my mom and dad. I also gave them red carnations. >> Correct  But I think that wasn\'t enough to express my love.>> Correct  So I bought some chickens.>> Correct  They were my parent\'s favorite. >> They are my parents\' favorite. I really want to make my parents happy.>> Correct  Sometimes my mom is very strict, but I still love her.>> Correct  My dad is always nice to me. >> Correct  He sometimes even gives me some allowances. >> Correct  So,I made them happy on Parent\'s day! >> Correct  

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