on parting...
학생이 쓴 원문
I bought a book last saturday. the book title is 'good parting'. It's a essay about mental. the contents is how to have a good parting with someone or something. People have a problem when we part with someone or something badly. George bush is a representative person who was parting badly with his young sister. It was influenced his childhood and It meents bad results. such as a desultory reading. this book tells us we have to sorrow our parting. not to stand without tears. when we overcome ourt parting with greif. we can meet another love.
강사 첨삭
[이름],
So this is the book you told me about. Sorry I didn’t understand the title of the book during our class. Anyhow, I hope I’ll be able to get a copy and read it. Have a great day. ^^
Jenny
Here are the corrections:
I bought a book last Saturday.
>> Correct.
the book title is 'good parting'
>> The book’s title is “Good Parting”.
It's a essay about mental.
>> It’s a psychological essay.
the contents is how to have a good parting with someone or something.
>> The content is how to have a good parting with someone or something.
People have a problem when we part with someone or something badly.
>> People usually have problems with parting.
George bush is a representative person who was parting badly with his young sister.
>> George Bush is an example. He didn’t have a good parting with his younger sister.
It was influenced his childhood and It meents bad results. such as a desultory reading.
>> It influenced his childhood and caused bad results such as desultory reading.
this book tells us we have to sorrow our parting.
>> This book tells us how we can handle partings.
not to stand without tears.
>>We have to feel the sorrow and not to stand without tears.
when we overcome ourt parting with greif. we can meet another love.
>> When we overcome our parting with grief, we can meet another love.
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