On Sunday.
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>>>On sunday, i went to Ha-Dong.
>>>Correct
>>>it is famous for cherry blossoms in Spring.
>>>Correct
>>>There are a lot of cherry blossom side of the road about 4km.
>>>There are a lot of cherry blossoms on the side of the road- about 4 kilometres.
>>>can you imagine it?
>>>Correct
>>>i could pass flower tunnel.
>>>I could pass through a flower tunnel.
>>>it was fantastic.
>>>Correct. Better: It was fantastic!
>>>for it, i made a picnic lunch.
>>>I made a picninc lunch for it.
>>>for prepare picnic lunch i woke up at 6 am.
>>>To prepare the picnic lunch, I had to wake up at 6 am.
>>>it was little tired.
>>>It was a little tiring.
>>>and i daparted my home at 8:30 am.
>>>Correct
>>>when we arrived at Ha-dong, it was 10:30 am.
>>>When we arrived at Ha-dong, it was already 10:30 am.
>>>there was not crowd at that time.
>>>There was no crowd at that time.
>>>but when we depart from Ha-dong, the road was fill with cars.
>>>But when we departed from Ha-dong, the road was filled with cars.
>>>my friend and i thought we made good choice what we start our trip in early time.
>>>My friend and I thought that we made a good choice in starting our trip at an early time.
>>>after then we went to Jin-ju castle.
>>>After that, we went to Jin-ju castle.
>>>it is historical place.
>>>It is a historical place.
>>>i enjoyed my weekend very well.
>>>Correct
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