On the Internet, you can say whatever you want. Do you think this is true?
학생이 쓴 원문
I can say anything what I want on web site. However, this site can share everyone, all people can see and talk each other. Even though I can anything, we should be cautious. Because, internet is connected all over the world.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I found myself agreeing with all of your ideas! Thanks for your time and effort to make your homework everyday despite your busy schedule. See you later! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>>I can say anything I want on the website. However, this site can be accessed by everyone. All people can see and talk to each other.
2. Even though I can anything, we should be cautious. Because, internet is connected all over the world.
>>>Even though I can post anything, we should be cautious because internet connects people all over the world.
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