On the way to work
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I think I walk for 40minutes at least every day. Because I go to work by public transportation. As I said, I and my husband are working for the same company so I always be with him on the way to work. In fact, it takes one and half hour to arrive at the office, which is a long time compared to others. However, While going to work, we talk to each other and take some sleep on the train every morning. If I didn\'t get married, I can assure I would be lonelier than I am now.
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I think I walk for 40minutes at least every day.
>> I think I walk for at least 40 minutes every day.
Because I go to work by public transportation.
>> It\'s because I go to work by public transportation.
As I said, I and my husband are working for the same company so I always be with him on the way to work.
>> As I said, my husband and I are working for the same company so I am always with him on the way to work.
In fact, it takes one and half hour to arrive at the office, which is a long time compared to others.
>> Correct
However, While going to work, we talk to each other and take some sleep on the train every morning.
>> However, while going to work, we talk to each other and get some sleep on the train every morning.
If I didn\'t get married, I can assure I would be lonelier than I am now.
>> If I weren\'t married, I can assure I would be lonelier than I am now.
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