on weekend, what shall I do?? for fun?? which is the most benefit for me learning english?
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Hi [이름],
Thanks for doing your homework again. I appreciate your effort.
Hopefully, you\'ll get to do something that you would consider special next weekend.
Please don\'t forget to check the revisions I made.
Have a lovely day!
Amanda^-^
I have no special plan to do in weekend. for now,,
>> I have no special plan for this weekend.
>> OR: There\'s nothing special that I want to do this weekend.
I will manipulate my schedule for doing in weekend.
*** I\'m not sure exactly what you mean in this sentence, so I couldn\'t give any correction just yet.
Suggestion:
>> I will just do what I usually do on weekends.
first,, I definitely go to church.. the reason is the preacher is a person that I know..
>> First, I will definitely go to church because I know the preacher.
He was a my superior coworker..
>> He\'s my superior at work.
He gave me my salary.
>> Correct
>> OR: He pays for my salary.
Today is saturday..Father went to other party,,
>> Today is Saturday, and my father went to a party.
and all day long, me and my mother spent doing nothing special..
>> All day long, my mother and I spent the day doing nothing special.
thanks ..for reading..
>> Thanks for reading.
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