on weekend, what shall I do?? for fun?? which is the most benefit for me learning english?

2017-11-27 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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I have no special plan to do in weekend.. for now,, I will manipulate my schedule for doing in weekend.. first,, I definitely go to church.. the reason is the preacher is a person that I know.. He was a my superior coworker.. He gave me my salary.. Today is saturday.. Father went to other party,, and all day long, me and my mother spent doing nothing special.. thanks ..for reading..

강사 첨삭


Hi [이름],


Thanks for doing your homework again. I appreciate your effort.

Hopefully, you\'ll get to do something that you would consider special next weekend.

Please don\'t forget to check the revisions I made.

Have a lovely day!

Amanda^-^



I have no special plan to do in weekend. for now,,

>> I have no special plan for this weekend.  

>> OR: There\'s nothing special that I want to do this weekend.


 I will manipulate my schedule for doing in weekend.

*** I\'m not sure exactly what you mean in this sentence, so I couldn\'t give any correction just yet.

Suggestion:

>> I will just do what I usually do on weekends.

 first,, I definitely go to church.. the reason is the preacher is a person that I know..

>> First, I will definitely go to church because I know the preacher.


He was a my superior coworker..

>> He\'s my superior at work.


 He gave me my salary.

>> Correct

>> OR: He pays for my salary.


Today is saturday..Father went to other party,,

>> Today is Saturday, and my father went to a party.


and all day long, me and my mother spent doing nothing special..

>> All day long, my mother and I spent the day doing nothing special.

 thanks ..for reading..

>> Thanks for reading.


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