On what occasions do you give flowers in your country?

2021-12-01 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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We give flowers to students who graduate their school. Also we give them when a certain person starts a business. We call the flower a flower wreath.

강사 첨삭

Hello Rachel!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


We give flowers to students who graduate their school. 

>> We give flowers to students who graduate from their school. 

Also we give them when a certain person starts a business. 

>> Also, we give them when a certain person starts a business. 

We call the flower a flower wreath.

>> We call the arrangement of flowers a flower wreath.

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