On what occasions do you usually go to an amusement park?
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Just my mom and dad just go to an amusement park and I just go to the amusement park.
And I go to amusement park I and my family play.
Or I and my sister want to go to an amusement park and my mom and dad know that and go the amusement park.
And I and my family play maybe 5 or 6hours.
These are on what occasions do I usually go to an amusement park.
But I somtimes go to the amusement park.
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Just my mom and dad just go to an amusement park and I just go to the amusement park.
>> We just go to the amusement park when we want to.
And I go to amusement park I and my family play.
>> My family and I go to the amusement park to play.
Or I and my sister want to go to an amusement park and my mom and dad know that and go the amusement park.
>> Or when my sister and I want to just suddenly go there, they already know it and take us there.
And I and my family play maybe 5 or 6hours.
>> And, we stay there for 5 or 6 hours.
These are on what occasions do I usually go to an amusement park.
>> Usually, there are no special occasions to go to the amusement park.
But I somtimes go to the amusement park.
>> But I sometimes go to the amusement park.
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