Once again even though I hate you.

2011-02-24 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

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Are you embarrased a little ? Sorry ~~ It's not about you. I wasn't sure if I translated the name to the English one well. It's a tv program that gives 5 couples the solutions of their wrong married lives. They weren't able to keep on them because of many problems. So the producers of the program have them compete for lots of money by dancing such as salsa, jazz or cha-cha etc. I didn't think they were normal people when I saw them first. Because they showed us a severe quarrel from the simple troubles. I want to talk about the couples in detail in next composition. This program has showed over a month. They learned dancing only for money at first. However they are showing a possibility that they can back on track surprisingly as time went by. - to be continued :D

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Hi [이름]! I need to pause three seconds to figure out what you mean at first. Then I realized it’s the title. Haha! -Tiny^0^ Are you embarrased a little ? Sorry ~~ It's not about you. >> “Are You Embarrased a Little?” (Sorry ~ It's not about you.) >> (You have to write it this way so I can distinguish your title kk^-^v) I wasn't sure if I translated the name to the English one well. >> I wasn't sure if I translated the title correctly in English. It's a tv program that gives 5 couples the solutions of their wrong married lives. >>correct. >>Writing tip: Numbers from one to nine are normally spelled out when writing. Numbers 10 and above can be written as is.They weren't able to keep on them because of many problems. >> They weren't able to keep them because of many problems. >>(I don’t exactly know what you mean with “keep on them”)So the producers of the program have them compete for lots of money by dancing such as salsa, jazz or cha-cha etc. >> So the producers of the program have them compete for lots of money by dancing salsa, jazz cha-cha, etc.I didn't think they were normal people when I saw them first. >>correctBecause they showed us a severe quarrel from the simple troubles. >> Because they showed us a severe quarrel from simple troubles. I want to talk about the couples in detail in next composition. >> I want to talk about the couples in detail in my next composition. This program has showed over a month. >> This program has been showed over a month. They learned dancing only for money at first. >>correctHowever they are showing a possibility that they can back on track surprisingly as time went by. >> However they are showing a possibility that they can be back on track surprisingly as time goes by. >> However they showed a possibility that they can be back on track surprisingly as time went by. - to be continued :D >> to be continued... :D  

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