One colleague

Hi [이름]~

As I said earlier, It is really heart breaking to see a skilled employee go. But we wish your colleague a great life ahead :)

REMEMBER:

Here are some points to remember when using \'have\' and \'has\'.

Let\'s start with the basics.

They can both be used to show possession and are important in making the \'perfect tenses\'.
\'Had\' is the past tense of both \'has\' and \'have\'.

HAVE
Have is used with some pronouns and plural nouns:
\'I have a great English teacher.\'
\'You have toothpaste on your chin.\'
\'We have a meeting at 12.\'
\'Nurses have a difficult job.\'

HAS
Has is used with the third person singular. For example:
\'She has a great personality.\'
\'He has a new haircut.\'
\'The washing machine has a leak in it\'.
\'It has a hole near the door.\'

^_^

~Teacher Megan~

HERE ARE MY CORRECTIONS:

Few colleagues retired from his job recently.

>>> One of my colleagues retired from his job recently.

 Today, a leader of the support team, which is in charge of rule and personnel of company, said farewell to us.

>>> Today, a leader of the support team, which is in charge of rule and personnel of company, bade us farewell.

 He has since been 19 years when he joined the company. he is very passionate and competent, and also good speaker.

>>> It\'s been 19 years when he joined the company. He is very passionate and competent, and also good speaker.

I don\'t know exactly what he\'ve done, well. Anyway, Our company held a farewell party which took places at restaurant famous for Samgyeopsal.

>>> I don\'t know exactly what he\'d done.Anyway, Our company held a farewell party which took place at a restaurant famous for its Samgyeopsal.

Actually, he moved to our another subsidiary as a team leader of personnel.

>>> Actually, he moved to our subsidiary as a personnel team leader. 

He told us that he is eager to do good business for this company, and our president acknowledged him and let him move.

>>> Correct.

employees gave him some gift for cheering his future forward, it seems like he was almost about to cry.

>>> Employees gave him some gift to cheer him on his endeavor, it seems like he was almost about to cry.

he gave an advises that we\'ll have to try for achieve a new business even though we get failed.

>>> He gave an advise that we\'ll have to try to achieve a new business even though we failed.