one day, I give some money for the poor.

2024-02-29 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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I don\'t give anything for the poor. When I was a student, I gave some money for poor men. One day, I saw them buying alcohol with my money. So nowadays, I don\'t give anything for the poor.

강사 첨삭

Hello Da [이름], 

I understand your hesitation about giving money to the poor after seeing them spend it on alcohol, but it\'s important to remember that not everyone is the same, and while some may misuse the help, others might genuinely be in need. 

~Teacher Cathy 

 

I don\'t give anything for the poor. 

>>I don\'t give anything to the poor. 

When I was a student, I gave some money for poor men. 

>>When I was a student, I gave some money to poor men. 

One day, I saw them buying alcohol with my money. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>But I saw them use my money to buy alcohol. 

So nowadays, I don\'t give anything for the poor. 

>>So nowadays, I don\'t give anything to the poor. 

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