One day, three things I want to have
학생이 쓴 원문
First, I want to have a positive mind.
It makes me good realationship with everyone else.
Second, I want to have immunity.
It will help me stay healthy for a long time.
Lastly, third, I want to have the present.
I am happy now.
And now it\'s forever.
To have the present is to be here forever.
강사 첨삭
Awwww, your answer is a very nice one! It is so good I really admire the way you think. :) Thank you for sharing this with me. ^_^
See you in class tomorrow dear!
First, I want to have a positive mind.
>> Correct.
It makes me good realationship with everyone else.
>> It makes me have a good relationship with everyone else.
Second, I want to have immunity.
>> Correct.
It will help me stay healthy for a long time.
>> Correct.
Lastly, third, I want to have the present.
>> Lastly, I want to be in the present situation I am right now.
I am happy now.
>> Correct.
And now it\'s forever.
>> And, now I hope this last\'s forever.
To have the present is to be here forever.
>> Being in the present is like a good forever for me.
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