One more thing, Abegail^^:(continued...)
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually, before I started this phone english, my friends had recommended me to change my class time to the later one.
But I didn't listened to them cause I thought I could make this.
But in a real sense, my blanket welcomes me so much and I'm not the strong one who can get over the temptation.T.T
So, finally I'm thinking about changing my class time to 7:10 am.
And before I call to the manager and talk about this, I want to ask you first about your schedule and your opinion.
I'll wait for your reply. Bye~
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Wow! I am so happy that you are feeling comfortable during our class and that you do your best to participate well during our discussion. I am so glad that you became my student. Every morning, you often make me smile because of your stories and opinions. You are a wonderful student, and actually you do good every class.
With regards to your morning habits I think it's really hard to wake up early in the morning and have a class. It's your choice if you want to change your schedule, my next class after 6:10 is 7:30 am. I will be glad if we can maintain our class even if you change our time schedule. Hope to talk to you again tomorrow. Have a wonderful evening!
Actually, before I started this phone english, my friends had recommended me to change my class time to the later one.
>>Actually, before I started this telephone class my friends kept on telling me to have a class around mid-morning.But I didn't listened to them cause I thought I could make this.
>>But I didn't listen to them because I thought I could do this.But in a real sense, my blanket welcomes me so much and I'm not the strong one who can get over the temptation.T.T
>>But in reality, I can not turn down the temptation that my blanket is offering me.
>>But in reality, I can not get over easily with my blanket early in the morning.So, finally I'm thinking about changing my class time to 7:10 am.
>>Finally, I was thinking of changing my class schedule to 7:10 am.And before I call to the manager and talk about this, I want to ask you first about your schedule and your opinion.>>Although, before I call the manager and discuss about this I want to know your schedule and your opinion.
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