One of my bad habit

2010-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jennifer

학생이 쓴 원문

If someone asks me that who is the most untidy person, the correct answer would be a me. I'm not good at clera up a mess, the places aroud me are terribly disarranged. The reason of that I used to listen nags a lot from my parents when I was young. After marriage, my husband also getting at me, that's why we had quarreled very often. It's a really stressful thing to me. Such a bad habbit made me forget where I put my stuff,so I have wasted of time to find those things. Besides I can't concentrate on my working or studying in my disordered place. I am fully aware of that the untidy habit has many demerits, but it is hard to change my old habit at once. From now on I'll try to get rid of my bad habit slowly.

강사 첨삭

If someone asks me that who is the most untidy person, the correct answer would be a me. >> If someone asks me that who is the most untidy person, the most definite answer would be me. I'm not good at clera up a mess, the places aroud me are terribly disarranged. >> I'm not good at cleaning up a mess and fixing things around me which are terribly disarranged. The reason of that I used to listen nags a lot from my parents when I was young. >> The reason is that I got used to listening to my parents nags when I was young. After marriage, my husband also getting at me, that's why we had quarreled very often. >>When I got married, my husband nags me about it that’s why we quarrel very often.  It's a really stressful thing to me. >>Correct.Such a bad habbit made me forget where I put my stuff, so I have wasted of time to find those things. >> Such a bad habit makes me forget where I put some of my stuff so I waste my time in finding those things.Besides I can't concentrate on my working or studying in my disordered place. >> Besides that, I can’t concentrate on my work or study in my disorganized place.I am fully aware of that the untidy habit has many demerits, but it is hard to change my old habit at once. >> I am fully aware of that my untidy habit has many demerits, but it is hard to change my old habit at once. From now on I'll try to get rid of my bad habit slowly. >> Correct.

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