One of my bucket lists
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Someday I would like to take English training abroad for a few months. I don\'t care about what country I take the training. But if I have a chance to do, I would like to stay in New Zealand or Australia.
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Good morning, Gi [이름]!
Thank you for taking the time to do your homework. :D
See you later. ^^
See you later. ^^
-T.Jhozel
Someday I would like to take English training abroad for a few months.
>> Correct!
I don\'t care about what country I take the training.
>> I don\'t mind where I get the training.
But if I have a chance to do, I would like to stay in New Zealand or Australia.
>> But if given the opportunity, I would like to stay in New Zealand or Australia.
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