one of my goal is I got real states agent when I was 30
학생이 쓴 원문
I had challenged certificate of real states agent in korea
and I got it
I had study almost a two years for getting it
To challenge make us to be exited
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]. Thank you for sharing your experience on how to be successful in life. I think the motivation that got you where you are right now is you challenged yourself. That is admirable. I appreciate you sharing your thoughts once again on the homework topic. Maybe, we can talk about it in of our classes. Have a good night and see you in class. ~ Teacher Jane c\",)
one of my goal is I got real states agent when I was 30
>>> One of my goals was to be a real estate agent when I was 30.
I had challenged certificate of real states agent in Korea
>>> I challenged myself to get a certificate as a real estate agent in Korea.
and I got it
>>> And I got it.
I had study almost a two years for getting it
>>> I studied for almost two years to get it.
To challenge make us to be exited
>>> To challenge ourselves makes us excited/ motivated.
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