One of the most pressing issues proper hygiene

2020-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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I think Hand washing is one of the best ways proper hygiene .so i have to keep try hand Washing anytime I \" ll introduce 6 item below 1.before during. And after preparing food. 2.before eating food. 3. Before and after caring for someone at home who is sick with vomiting or diarrer. 4.after blowing nose .coughing or sneezing 5. After touching an animal animal feed. Or animal waste. 6. After touching garbage.

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Good evening Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for diligently writing on our composition board tonight. ^^
We didn\'t study for today but I\'m happy because you wrote something.
Please keep on writing.
See you again in class tomorrow. ^^
~Charry


I think Hand washing is one of the best ways proper hygiene .

>> I think hand washing is one of the best ways to maintain proper hygiene.

so i have to keep try hand Washing anytime

>> So, I have to frequently wash my hands.
I \" ll introduce 6 item below
>> I will mention six occasions where our hands should be washed:
1.before during. And after preparing food.
>> Wash your hands before, during, and after preparing food.
2.before eating food.
>> Wash your hands before eating food.
3. Before and after caring for someone at home who is sick with vomiting or diarrer.
>> Wash your hands before and after caring for someone who is sick at home with vomiting or diarrhea.
4.after blowing nose .coughing or sneezing
>> Wash your hands after blowing your nose, coughing or sneezing.
5. After touching an animal animal feed.  Or animal waste.

>> Wash your hands after touching an animal, animal feed, or animal feed. 
6. After touching garbage.

>> Wash your hands after touching garbage/waste products.

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