One of the most pressing issues proper hygiene
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I think Hand washing is one of the best ways proper hygiene .
>> I think hand washing is one of the best ways to maintain proper hygiene.
so i have to keep try hand Washing anytime
>> So, I have to frequently wash my hands.
I \" ll introduce 6 item below
>> I will mention six occasions where our hands should be washed:
1.before during. And after preparing food.
>> Wash your hands before, during, and after preparing food.
2.before eating food.
>> Wash your hands before eating food.
3. Before and after caring for someone at home who is sick with vomiting or diarrer.
>> Wash your hands before and after caring for someone who is sick at home with vomiting or diarrhea.
4.after blowing nose .coughing or sneezing
>> Wash your hands after blowing your nose, coughing or sneezing.
5. After touching an animal animal feed. Or animal waste.
>> Wash your hands after touching an animal, animal feed, or animal feed.
6. After touching garbage.
>> Wash your hands after touching garbage/waste products.
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