One person emotion.

2011-10-26 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

학생이 쓴 원문

i read Not care genres but mostly Novel and biography.but i think these are all books that didn't only help me. i think Media or Literature or Culture affected us but these hadn't always affected good methods,so we should consider better things. in fact,it looked at a person. one person has alot of feeling and a few hundreds felt.personal diffierent things. when i was in military Coast General OutPost captain. my responsibility sector was about 00 kilometer. you know,my country is under a flag of truce. i thought, i didn't definitely know one person's emotion. but i always taught and had discipline about trivial things. i guess you can't undetstand.i don't want to understand them. but to assure ones thing. one person was hurt to you. he never Do forget you.

강사 첨삭

Hello there,       Thank you so much for this composition. I always admire you for your diligence. I hope that you would keep that attitude to help you in you in your English journey. I know you will be a very good English speaker in  the future. Take care! -Verna- i read Not care genres but mostly Novel and biography.but i think these are all books that didn\'t only help me.>>I don\'t care what genre of books do I read but I mostly read novewl and biography. I think these books don\'t just help me.i think Media or Literature or Culture affected us but these hadn\'t always affected good methods,so we should consider better things.>> I think media, literature and culture affected us but not always in a good way so we better be considerate.in fact,it looked at a person. one person has alot of feeling and a few hundreds felt.personal diffierent things. >>In fact, if you will try to observe a person, he has several emotions which others don\'t understand. Those that we call personal differences.when i was in military Coast General OutPost captain.my responsibility sector was about 00 kilometer. >> When I was a military coast general outpost captain, my responsibility was about 00 kilometer.You know my country is under a flag of truce.>>Correcti thought, i didn\'t definitely know one person\'s emotion. but i always taught and had discipline about trivial things. >>I thought, i didn\'t definitely know one person\'s emotion but i always taught and disciplined in the military about trivial things.i guess you can\'t undetstand.i don\'t want to understand them. >>I guess you can\'t undetstand because I don\'t even want to understand them. but to assure ones thing.one person was hurt to you.he never Do forget you. >>But one thing is for sure, a person who will hurt you won\'t forget you.

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