One thing I really want to change in my life
학생이 쓴 원문
I really want to go back to the CSAT exam day.
At that time, I caught a severe cold, and I messed up my test because of my running nose.
I couldn\'t realize the one day would change my whole life.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Ryan!^^
Thank you for doing your homework. It\'s a good practice for your writing and grammar skills. Keep it up! See you in our next class. ^^
At that time, I caught a severe cold, and I messed up my test because of my running nose.
>>>At that time, I caught a terrible cold and messed up my test because of my runny nose.
I couldn\'t realize the one day would change my whole life.
>>>I couldn\'t realize that that day would change my whole life.
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