One thing in my home that I couldn\'t live without is air conditioner.
학생이 쓴 원문
One thing in my home that I couldn\'t live without is air conditioner.
Now, the weather in Korea is too hot.
So to live in this weather, I really need to it.
If I can\'t use it, my condition will be very sensitive and angry every day.
Therefore, air conditioner is essential for me.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kara!^^
Now, the weather in Korea is too hot.
>> Korea\'s weather is scorching hot.
If I can\'t use it, my condition will be very sensitive and angry every day.
Therefore, air conditioner is essential for me.
Bed is something I can\'t live without!
I can\'t sleep anywhere; I can only sleep in bed.
Andrea
One thing in my home that I couldn\'t live without is air conditioner.
>> One thing in my home that I couldn\'t live without is an air conditioner.
Now, the weather in Korea is too hot.
>> Korea\'s weather is scorching hot.
So to live in this weather, I really need to it.
>> So to survive this weather, I really need it.
If I can\'t use it, my condition will be very sensitive and angry every day.
>> If I can\'t use it, I will be in a bad condition, sensitive, and angry every day.
Therefore, air conditioner is essential for me.
>> Therefore, the air conditioner is essential for me.
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