One tube make three people's mood bad.

2015-10-16 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

Before my family movie in to another house.My neighbor and my mom moved the tube to my house.I have to take a bath using tube.My neighbor though there are not tube owner. But yesterday mom and I met our before house next house grandmother.She asked to our "Did you take my tube." Then, we say "Yes".So, neighbor grandmother came to my house today and took a tube to her house.And she were angry.So, she say bad words to neighbor who moved the tube with my mom.My mom cleaned the tube very hard but I can used the tube because it was heavy. So, my mom feel not good. And the neighbor grandmother was angry because the owner is her.And my neighbor is angry because neighbor grandmother said bad words to her.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^ Good evening. Oh my Gosh! ^^ What happened in your neighborhood was so terrible. Good thing, they did not hurt each other physically. By the way, what tube was that? I hope they will forgive each other. What happened there was a misunderstanding. ^^ Anyway, all good things. I will see you then in our class. Take care! ^^   ~~ Teacher Kris   Before my family movie in to another house.My neighbor and my mom moved the tube to my house. >> Before my family moved into an another house, my neighbor and my mom moved the tube in my house. I have to take a bath using tube. >> I had to take a bath using the tube. My neighbor though there are not tube owner. >> My neighbor thought that no one owns the tube. But yesterday mom and I met our before house next house grandmother. >> But, yesterday, my mom and I met a grandmother who is also our neighbor. She asked to our \"Did you take my tube.\" >> She asked us, \"Did you take my tube?\" Then, we say \"Yes\". >> Then we said, \"Yes.\" So, neighbor grandmother came to my house today and took a tube to her house. >> So, the grandmother came into my house today and took the tube. And she were angry. >> She was also angry. So, she say bad words to neighbor who moved the tube with my mom. >> So, she yelled and said bad words to our neighbor who took the tube with my mom. My mom cleaned the tube very hard but I can used the tube because it was heavy. >> My mom cleaned the tube very well but I couldn\'t use it because it\'s very heavy. So, my mom feel not good. >> So, my mom felt bad about it. And the neighbor grandmother was angry because the owner is her. >> And the grandmother was very angry because she is the owner. And my neighbor is angry because neighbor grandmother said bad words to her. >> And my other neighbor was angry also because the grandmother said bad words to her.

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