One who don't hesitate to put off

2016-07-27 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

I think that I am a type of person who would like to immediately do something especially when other people want me to do that. Of course, I am not sure that other people also think so. However, it is true that I have made an effort to be the type of person. Thus, I don't like a person who don't do something without delay. I don't enjoy waiting for the one to do something because the time seems to me such a long time. Moreover, I don't feel easy to ask other people something. Probably, I possess an intrinsic character rather than an extrinsic one. In fact, people don't feel same weight on a matter which as other people care. When it comes to me, it applies in the same way. 'Not my problem' does not come like 'my problem'. In some sense, we are all selfish since we have to survive in this tough world. We have to live our lives by ourselves like a song called 'we're all alone'. To be sad, that's why it is difficult to blame other people due to their indifference.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!   Thank you for this creative composition. I appreciate that you\'ve shared something about you. On what kind of person you are. You actually possess a positive attitude. ^^   _Teacher Dianne   I think that I am a type of person who would like to immediately do something especially when other people want me to do that. >> Correct >> Or: I think, I am a kind of person who likes to do something immediately especially when other people told me to do so. Of course, I am not sure that other people also think so. >> Correct >> Or: Of course, I am not sure whether other people think the same way. However, it is true that I have made an effort to be the type of person. >> However, it is true that I have made an effort to be that type of person. Thus, I don\'t like a person who don\'t do something without delay. >> Thus, I don\'t like a person who doesn\'t do something without delay. I don\'t enjoy waiting for the one to do something because the time seems to me such a long time. >> I don\'t enjoy waiting for someone to do something because the time to me seems long. Moreover, I don\'t feel easy to ask other people something. >> Correct >> Or: Moreover, I don\'t feel comfortable asking other people for something. Probably, I possess an intrinsic character rather than an extrinsic one. >> Correct In fact, people don\'t feel same weight on a matter which as other people care. >> In fact, people don\'t feel the same weight about a matter which other people care about. When it comes to me, it applies in the same way. >> Correct >> Or: In my case, it applies the same way. \'Not my problem\' does not come like \'my problem\'. >> Correct In some sense, we are all selfish since we have to survive in this tough world. >> Correct We have to live our lives by ourselves like a song called \'we\'re all alone\'. >> Correct To be sad, that\'s why it is difficult to blame other people due to their indifference. >> Correct >> Or: A sad truth, that\'s why it is difficult to blame other people due to their indifference.

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