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1. Because of the COVID-19 pandemic, a lot of business trips have to be put on hold and most were done through online mode. Do you think online business conferences can replace face-to-face conferences? What is your opinion of it?
Pandemic has been changing everything in our daily life. Business meetings are also replaced online meetings. These are different from face to face meetings. When we meet in person, we communicate verbally and non-verbally at the same time reading other\'s reaction. And we can have time to get closer each other. I think that online meetings are convenient and have lots of adventages. But they can\'t replace original one completely.
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Your answer: Pandemic has been changing everything in our daily life. Business meetings are also replaced online meetings. These are different from face to face meetings. When we meet in person, we communicate verbally and non-verbally at the same time reading other\'s reaction. And we can have time to get closer each other. I think that online meetings are convenient and have lots of adventages. But they can\'t replace original one completely.
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Question: Because of the COVID-19 pandemic, a lot of business trips have to be put on hold and most were done through online mode. Do you think online business conferences can replace face-to-face conferences? What is your opinion of it?
Your answer: Pandemic has been changing everything in our daily life. Business meetings are also replaced online meetings. These are different from face to face meetings. When we meet in person, we communicate verbally and non-verbally at the same time reading other\'s reaction. And we can have time to get closer each other. I think that online meetings are convenient and have lots of adventages. But they can\'t replace original one completely.
>> The pandemic is changing everything in our daily life. Business meetings are slowly being replaced by online meetings. When we meet in person, we communicate verbally and at the same time, we can read each other\'s reaction. We also have the opportunity to get closer with each other. I think that online meetings are convenient and have lots of advantages, but they can\'t replace face-to-face meetings completely.
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Great answer! I totally agree with you! :) But it looks like online meetings are here to stay, but I think business trips especially to a place with a nearby beach can be refreshing from time to time. :)
Cheers!
~Miya^^
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